Script Editing & Consulting

With over 20 years of writing experience in the film and television industry and scads of awards, I’ve not just written a lot of scripts but I’ve read heaps, and people seem to get a lot out of my notes.

I’ve got an instinct for structure and an analytic approach (you should see my spreadsheets) which can provide the insight you need to tackle that next draft.

And yeah, there’s all those decades writing comedy. I can help you find the funny, if that’s what you’re after. A funny story can be a tricky beast to tame, but I’ve delivered guest lectures on comedy writing for Melbourne Webfest, RMIT and JMC Academy plus the grade 1s and 2s at the local primary school. I even wrote a simple guide on writing funny stories for the new comic Squishbook. So AMA.